Poem About Snow!!!! By: M.J


 In room 23 we are learning how to use metaphor sentences. This week we had to right a poem with 8 metaphor sentences and we got to choose is we whanted to do wind Lighting and thunder, Hail and Snow I did SNOW. A metaphor is used when we compare 2 things. I was successful at coparing snow  with other interesting objects. Hope you like it By: Maya.J




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  1. Unknown10 March 2019 at 15:17

    Love this poem and how you've used metaphors in relation to snow. Did you do the illustration yourself?

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  2. Anonymous10 March 2019 at 17:03

    The best part if your learning is snow is the snow is cotton candy.
    This this reminds me of when I went to the fair and had cotton candy
    Why do you do you do the clouds is like snow because is that where the snow comes from.
    Maybe next time you you can put full stops. 😀

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  3. Anonymous10 March 2019 at 18:40

    hi maya i like how you described snow is like feather from a dove i think it's just the perfect thing.

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